potential passes
with soft sayonara smiles
goodbye, tomorrow
~ ~ ~
12/01/05 by cward2
Quite poignant words, fitting for an epitaph
12/01/05 by cloudy
...that you managed to convey so much feeling with so few words. I was left with that sad feeling about doors I never opened. Very nice.
12/01/05 by hugo_sam in Lost in the '70's
Well done. So much emotion in a very concise group of words. Opportunities missed.
12/01/05 by Elizabetht in SouthWest
Alessia... I am glad I found this today. Always, Lizzy
12/01/05 by Bill Dada
Intensely powerful. ty,bd
12/01/05 by sophia jane
I tend not to like haikus because they so rarely capture anything of consequence, but this is really well done. I don't know why I expected anything less from you!
12/02/05 by Belegon in SoCal
...that one of the strengths AND weaknesses of the form is the similiarity to horoscopes. They can mean whatever you want them to mean depending on what you are thinking of when you read them. While that is certainly true of this, the title gives it direction. Wonderful. simply wonderful.
02/01/07 by Amyfriend in Ontario, Canada
and very well done.
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