parallel passion in soul slipping symmetry;
the acute pleasure-pain of love
raised to the power of two
and multiplied by the potential energy
of tangential torment
integral waves of associative properties
form distributive barriers --
keeping the harmonics of ecstasy
prisoner to the patterns of inertia
and creating a resonance
that threatens structural integrity
the sum of the remainder
of the dividends of circular ill logic
chases all but the most linear desires
into the realm of substandard deviation
until life is but a flaccid fraction of the infinite
and love conforms to the normative curve
~ ~ ~
Astounding
03/11/05 by vella_ms
how you can equate love/passion so accurately in calculus terms! Awesome job, sweeting. looking forward to many more to come.
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03/11/05 by Anonymous
This one actually has promise. Glad to see you slipping away from that ass sucking crap you called poetry when you first got here...
Ha!
03/11/05 by Anonymous
Fun poem, Imp! I had to dig out my old stats text for this one! Flyguy
wow
03/11/05 by WickedEve
"Yes, Ms. Jones, I did my homework, but the dog ate my poem." ;)
:)
03/11/05 by Bridget69 in Canada
A very interesting emotional equation.
Great job!
03/11/05 by Anonymous
This is a fine entry! Thanks, Boo
witty word wizard
03/11/05 by My Erotic Tale
wow some of these words aren't in my dictionary, wait this ain't a dictionary its play bo... huh a book on the quantum physics of the female anatomy. much like this poem
Brilliant,
03/12/05 by LadyJeanne
clever and vaguely disturbing. I'm not sure why this left me feeling a bit uneasy; perhaps it's the application of mathematical logic to the ethereal. Beautifully written and exceptionally imaginative. Thank you, Imp. This one is really a stunner. Your talent and your mind truly humbles me. LJ.
sign, sine, everywhere a cosine
04/07/05 by The_Fool
Integrating math makes a differentiating poem with linear translation into the imaginary image......*G*
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