Parting Embrace

parting embrace
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

more than it appears
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

an excuse to touch
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

bodies pressed together
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

too brief to savor
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

breathe now
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

please, this time more
one thousand one ...
... one thousand two

the night draws near
... one thousand three ...
imparting embrace

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If embrace could last forver
11/26/04 by Honey123
Oh, to be held in those warm, safe arms forever.... Lovely poem...you brought a smile to my face. Honey

Boy....
11/26/04 by ABSTRUSE
For a quickie that rocked!!!

Oh I recognise
11/26/04 by matriarch
that yearning, grasping need so well. Beautifully protrayed, Imp. Well done.

cool little poem....
11/26/04 by sack in USA
with a marvelous economy of line few can imitate. Excellent!!

soft smiles
11/27/04 by vella_ms
i wish i didn't know just how this felt. yearning... you captured that feeling so very well. continue please. *hugs* v~

new poems review mention
11/27/04 by My Erotic Tail
for saturday 27 2004 thanks for the journey~ Impressively witty and cute~

WTF????
11/27/04 by Anonymous in U S of A
Crapola

???
11/28/04 by Anonymous
What in this poem are you trying to say? It says it's under erotic poetry but there's nothing that draws the reader in. No emotion. "One thousand one.....One thousand two" made me feel like a 1st grader trying to understand a children's story/poem??

Impressive
11/28/04 by Lauren Hynde
I love the way it flows, the control. You can practically feel the time slow down, you can sense each heartbeat. A remarkable feat for such a contained poem. The play of words in the last verse of the last stanza is perfect.

The waiting...
11/28/04 by
is always the hardest part. But oh, so necassary.

I read this several times
11/28/04 by WickedEve
and I love it. I felt this poem. What a wonderful job you did with it.

Good Things~
11/28/04 by LilDarlin in ~Tenn
I have always been told.. Good things come to those who wait.. Well woohoooo.. Loved this poem I say~~!! The whole set-up just makes ya take your slow..sweet time.. Breathing it in an tasting every drop of the poem. Just a hot lil poem. More I say~~!!! *Big Smiles*

This is....
11/30/04 by ABSTRUSE
great crapola. I think I read it before, but I must have forgotten to post...LOL. Keep up with the crapola, it works.

That got me...
12/02/04 by Tatelou in UK
... right there *points at pussy*. Um, no! Scrap that! I meant *points at heart*. ;) Well done, Imp! Very concise and powerful poem. Lou xxx

Oh yes!
03/07/05 by LadyJeanne
Oh, I totally know that hesitant, hopeful, expectant yearning! "An excuse to touch ~ too brief to savor..." Splendidly done! Thank you. LJ

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11/27/05 by Bill Dada
The elasticity of time divided by the want of flesh equals this poem. ty,bd

How does it feel?
11/27/05 by Bill Dada
made me feel like a 1st grader trying to understand a children's story/poem?? Anonymous, you still have delusions of granduer, it will be years before you get to a 1st grade level of reading. Since this poem is well above a 1st grade level of reading of course you didn't understand it.