Full

There are no words for this want
eating my peace.
Soft strokes of midnight
blue
blow kisses 'cross
tomorrow, turning
ache into hope, full
filling, falling
stars of wonder: us.

There is no want for this world
without release.
Cold, blooded bones
buried
in choate pleas.
Yore sorrow, burning
turning pain, full
pleasure into promise -
missing only touch.

There is no world for these words
incomplete.
Liaise on dark fields
yields
more than less.
Unless the heavens
embrace my need, full.

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Totally beautiful
05/19/05 by herecomestherain in Australia
Imp -- this one is completely wonderful, I needed to read something gorgeous today and this was it! Lovely. Cheers, 'rain.

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05/19/05 by sophia jane
Beautiful poem, Imp.

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05/19/05 by Sabina_Tolchovsky
this one is gorgeous Imp...thank you Sabina

gimme back that key!
05/19/05 by Belegon in Southern California
...wandering around in our shared areas again there Imp? Everything seems bittersweet to me right now and this not the least of it, as certain lines evoke feelings I am either fighting or embracing. Ambitious use of language and form. Well said my friend.

Just beautiful
05/19/05 by Jennifer C
a really lovely piece, really enjoyed reading this, Thank you. ~ J

complex simplicity
05/19/05 by matriarch
All your work makes me think, but at its heart, it is pure feeling. And this piece is no exception. Exquisite wordplay to create evocative and moving images and feelings. Mat. xx

Eloquent
05/19/05 by angelicminx in Kentucky, USA
As always. ~Minx

Deeply moving.
05/19/05 by Samandiriel
I can feel it and relate to it. You have expressed it...thank you.

Full...
05/19/05 by Bridget69 in Canada
of deep emotion throughout.

Imp!
05/19/05 by neonurotic
this is fabulous work.. that first strophe is kick ass.

lovely :)
05/20/05 by Maria2394
very nice, Impressive!! I know you dont care much for my opinion, and I know why, but this is really good. I am seeing a lot of growth in you, excellent growth,. Keep it up!! maria

i apologize
05/20/05 by Maria2394
for the way I left a comment earlier. I know you care about all the FB you recieve, just as I do. Thank you for the very kind and gracious note you sent me. :)

You live up to both...
05/21/05 by Wanton Vixxxen
the title of this piece and your pen name. The poem was full... of such breathtaking expressions, it is absolutely exquisite! And you are most indeed VERY impressive I am just spellbound by poets like you. Thank you for sharing this with Me today, imp. Vixxx

Nice . . .
05/23/05 by Dar~ in USA
I felt your words inside myself. Like an answer to how I sometimes feel.

you've got my....
05/23/05 by dcpoet44
vote and all the other comments left ahead of this cover my thoughts as well......nicely done.......don

Again
05/25/05 by Honey123
you seem to know what goes on in my head and heart... *sigh... ~Honey

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08/15/05 by LeBroz in NY - too far from Atlanta
Look what I just found on the top list! What to say, after so many kind words; even the Vixxx spoke in such stunning terms. I like the way your words progress, stanzas linked in smooth continuity.

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11/27/05 by Bill Dada in awe
I've been there and done that, but I have never been able to put it into words like you have. Just amazing. ty,bd