Knead

NOW AVAILABLE AS AN AMAZON SHORT!


Below are the public comments left by readers while the first draft of Knead was posted on Literotica:

Nice one Alessia
02/20/06 by rgraham666 in Canada
I really liked the journey of the narrator, how she changed during the course of this short piece. And the little touches, like the sock, added a very nice fillip of realism to it. Nicely done.

Sweet.
02/20/06 by MistressJett
This is a very sweet piece. It pulled me right in - I could almost feel myself in that little room. :)

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02/20/06 by sophia jane
Very well done and descriptive. Now I have to go get myself a massage, too.

Artistry
02/20/06 by hugo_sam in Lost in the '70's
How thoroughly enjoyable. You turned what could be the mundane into a journey of infinite possibilities. Moving, engrossing and well done. Thank you Hugo

Wonderful and insightful
02/20/06 by huelust in usa
This was written in such a beautiful, clear voice. I'm a bodywork therapist, and I really appreciated the way you conveyed the intimacy of touch and the sensitivity of the practitioner to navigate emotional boundaries. Wonderful!

Sensual and Erotic
03/03/06 by Belegon in Southern California
...and without any sex too...and this? "Is there any love deeper than the absence of fear?" *shiver* What a great line!

It takes me...
01/13/07 by inlovewithyourghost in USA
...to places I love to travel. Thank you for the journey. It's a beautiful story.

It was me...
01/13/07 by Fallenfromgrace in London
who was on that table. It was me. You made me feel like it was anyway. Wonderful, absolutely flawless motion from touch to thought, fear to tranquility. Wonderful.


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