atop cream suede
brush my lips
with cinnamon cisele
Wet crimson sheath
between passion and promise
draws my fingers
to'ard darkened depths
Warm caramel kisses
against crushed satin
pique my desire
to breathe pink
Smoky moiré sheen
over tender folds
blankets my tongue
with velvet throb
A whispered release
in panne waves
weaves my name
through dream's tapestry
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08/17/05 by LeBroz in NY - too far from Atlanta
Sensual delights of textures unfolded, you are truly ~ impressive
fascinating!
08/17/05 by sack in USA
But, what are "panne waves?" Guess I have to get out Webster!
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08/17/05 by sophia jane
Well done, Imp, as always.
Tasty and texturized
08/17/05 by neonurotic
tantalized the senses in this erotic poem, Imp. Spectacular ;)
the title grabed me
08/17/05 by Anonymous
the last verse pulled by threads from the last verse...smooth...bluerains
Gotta Love
08/18/05 by Dar~ in USA
A poem based on material. Very elegant yet delicious tremors passed through me as I read it.
I love....
08/18/05 by Anonymous
.....the way you've used fabric in the fabric of your poem. It all fits together perfectly to make a rather erotic whole.. Tess
...
08/19/05 by minsue
*wistful sigh* Gorgeous, Imp.
Wow!
08/21/05 by Anonymous
Incredible images, beautiful. You actually made me drool!!
From Under the Bridge
08/27/05 by Trolly in U S of A
Better than some. Thanx.
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