fluid

i am the wine of peace
lingering on your lips

drink me
lest i fear

i am the river of hope
drowning you in desire

swim in me
lest i doubt

i am the blood of passion
burning in your veins

flow through me
lest i cool

i am the sweat of sex
dripping from your chin

satisfy me
lest i dry

i am the nectar of night
quenching your thirst

thank me
lest i wither

i am the dew of dreams
your morning memory

savor me
lest i forget

i am the water of truth
soothing your soul

hold me
lest i slip through your fingers

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Damn!
05/24/06 by MistressJett
Made me shiver all over! I can hear you speaking the words, and... just damn. Your poem was mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

lovely
05/24/06 by ghost_girl
alessia I voted you a 5 because you made me smile. Your tender words are a soothing relief from the poetry forum, you are wise not to frequent on a day like toady' keep up the good work maria

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05/24/06 by LeBroz in —NY - too far from Atlanta
This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

Smooth
05/25/06 by hugo_sam in Lost in the 70's
Smooth flow with evident passion expressed well. Thanks Hugo

The Consistent Imagery...
07/03/06 by Belegon in San Diego
...and the lack of capitalization lend themselves to the vizualization I get when I read this, helping my imagination find it's way to a destination that is uniquely mine...but hopefully somewhere near where you intended the reader to wind up....well done.

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12/06/06 by Bill Dada
Very, very...fluid. I liked.

Love's new commandments
01/18/07 by vella_ms
breath taking. im glad i stole these few moments to revel in your words.

Laced with...
02/01/07 by Amyfriend in Ontario, Canada
excited passion..and brings forth beautiful images. Very well done.

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