epitaph

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potential passes
with soft sayonara smiles
goodbye, tomorrow

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Poignant
12/01/05 by cward2
Quite poignant words, fitting for an epitaph

amazing...
12/01/05 by cloudy
...that you managed to convey so much feeling with so few words. I was left with that sad feeling about doors I never opened. Very nice.

Moving
12/01/05 by hugo_sam in Lost in the '70's
Well done. So much emotion in a very concise group of words. Opportunities missed.

Nicely done..
12/01/05 by Elizabetht in SouthWest
Alessia... I am glad I found this today. Always, Lizzy

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12/01/05 by Bill Dada
Intensely powerful. ty,bd

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12/01/05 by sophia jane
I tend not to like haikus because they so rarely capture anything of consequence, but this is really well done. I don't know why I expected anything less from you!

I always think...
12/02/05 by Belegon in SoCal
...that one of the strengths AND weaknesses of the form is the similiarity to horoscopes. They can mean whatever you want them to mean depending on what you are thinking of when you read them. While that is certainly true of this, the title gives it direction. Wonderful. simply wonderful.

Short, sweet...
02/01/07 by Amyfriend in Ontario, Canada
and very well done.