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Wednesday, January 31, 2007

Listen To Me

Surrender: Tales of Erotic Submission
UPDATE (6/3/2008): "Listen to Me" made its debut in NYC at the Happy Ending Lounge in August of 2006 where I read it to a live audience. It now appears in the print edition of fine flickering hungers and the upcoming BDSM anthology entitled Surrender: Tales of Erotic Submission along with stories by Eden Bradley, Eliza Gayle, and Reese Gabriel.

Here is the feedback it received when it was posted on Literotica:

5Ofcourse,
01/20/07 by vella_ms

there will be a sequel to this, correct? beautiful. just beautiful.

5Mmmm!
01/20/07 by SelenaKittyn

What a lovely, delightful tease. My idea of a great Valentine's Day surprise for sure! :)

5I Remember Well...
01/20/07 by Belegon in San Diego

The effect of this little vignette on our audience that night...If y'all think this is sexy to read, imagine hearing it read to you as you sit in a dark booth in a small New York nightclub...the only lights are candles on the tables, a bit of red atmospheric lighting behind the bar (to allow the bartenders to mix and people not to stumble) and the spotlight that shines on the dark-haired beauty with the seductive voice. She sits on a stool, the microphone at her lips and the only other sound in the club is the stifled groans of her squirming audience...

4Please
01/20/07 by Anonymous in USA

I do hope there will be a continuation of this story.

5Waiting on the edge...
01/20/07 by Dracona in USA

Such a quick build up of excitement only to be left hanging on the edge....mmmm....just how I like it. I shall be waiting breathlessly for more.

5very hot
01/20/07 by Unbridled_Passion

the blindfold was a nice touch

5Hot, hot, hot
01/20/07 by Darkniciad in IN, US

Without a doubt, a temperature riser. I really liked the use of "Are you ready for this?" to build up cadence and tension. Good luck in the contest!

5Well, that was...
01/20/07 by TE999 in Florida USA

ahem...impressive. Sexy little story that begs for a sequel. Nice one, imp. Good luck in the contest.

3left waiting
01/21/07 by Anonymous

Nice Start, lame ending

5Impresive Story
01/21/07 by bornagain in USA

imp I think you have a impresive story i hope you continue with continuance. Pat .

4Very pretty little story, Imp!
01/21/07 by SimonBrooke in Scotland

Impish, and delightful. I loved the ending.

5Meow!
01/24/07 by Aurora Black in Greece

I'd definitely take that for Valentine's over the standard flowers & chocolate! For such a short piece, it's bursting with enough eroticism to start a four-alarm fire. Good luck in the contest, lovely. *wink*

5very hot story
01/24/07 by israeli_gal

I hope you continue it!!!! Good luck in the ontest! Maharat

5Very hot
01/28/07 by Fallenfromgrace in UK

Hell imp! that was great :D i echo everyone else in saying i hope there is more to come! ;)

5The only thing better....
01/29/07 by RebeccaLeah in Old West

Is hearing it live. It was amazing, not knowing what would happen, just clinging to every word that fell from your lips. You added a tiny bit, but it's now perfect for Valentine's day and still as sexy as ever. :kiss:es

5More??
01/31/07 by ABSTRUSE

Please say there is more?? you teasing bitch. Abs.

5impressive doesn't even begin ...
02/01/07 by RogueLurker

... to describe this story or the author. :) A wonderfully sensuous begining. This one just carried me away. Looking forward to the continuation.

5Well done
02/06/07 by kbate

I died when the company was 'him'. So close - but for Lesbian sex, I was unhappy to see that...that...that...'him' was important. Gave you the five anyway - the story was so well written and the mood was so well set that the finale did not detract from the quality of the story, only from the quality of the sex for me.

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