Here is the feedback it received when it was posted on Literotica:
Ofcourse,
01/20/07 by vella_ms
there will be a sequel to this, correct? beautiful. just beautiful.
Mmmm!
01/20/07 by SelenaKittyn
What a lovely, delightful tease. My idea of a great Valentine's Day surprise for sure! :)
I Remember Well...
01/20/07 by Belegon in San Diego
The effect of this little vignette on our audience that night...If y'all think this is sexy to read, imagine hearing it read to you as you sit in a dark booth in a small New York nightclub...the only lights are candles on the tables, a bit of red atmospheric lighting behind the bar (to allow the bartenders to mix and people not to stumble) and the spotlight that shines on the dark-haired beauty with the seductive voice. She sits on a stool, the microphone at her lips and the only other sound in the club is the stifled groans of her squirming audience...
Please
01/20/07 by Anonymous in USA
I do hope there will be a continuation of this story.
Waiting on the edge...
01/20/07 by Dracona in USA
Such a quick build up of excitement only to be left hanging on the edge....mmmm....just how I like it. I shall be waiting breathlessly for more.
very hot
01/20/07 by Unbridled_Passion
the blindfold was a nice touch
Hot, hot, hot
01/20/07 by Darkniciad in IN, US
Without a doubt, a temperature riser. I really liked the use of "Are you ready for this?" to build up cadence and tension. Good luck in the contest!
Well, that was...
01/20/07 by TE999 in Florida USA
ahem...impressive. Sexy little story that begs for a sequel. Nice one, imp. Good luck in the contest.
left waiting
01/21/07 by Anonymous
Nice Start, lame ending
Impresive Story
01/21/07 by bornagain in USA
imp I think you have a impresive story i hope you continue with continuance. Pat .
Very pretty little story, Imp!
01/21/07 by SimonBrooke in Scotland
Impish, and delightful. I loved the ending.
Meow!
01/24/07 by Aurora Black in Greece
I'd definitely take that for Valentine's over the standard flowers & chocolate! For such a short piece, it's bursting with enough eroticism to start a four-alarm fire. Good luck in the contest, lovely. *wink*
very hot story
01/24/07 by israeli_gal
I hope you continue it!!!! Good luck in the ontest! Maharat
Very hot
01/28/07 by Fallenfromgrace in UK
Hell imp! that was great :D i echo everyone else in saying i hope there is more to come! ;)
The only thing better....
01/29/07 by RebeccaLeah in Old West
Is hearing it live. It was amazing, not knowing what would happen, just clinging to every word that fell from your lips. You added a tiny bit, but it's now perfect for Valentine's day and still as sexy as ever. :kiss:es
More??
01/31/07 by ABSTRUSE
Please say there is more?? you teasing bitch. Abs.
impressive doesn't even begin ...
02/01/07 by RogueLurker
... to describe this story or the author. :) A wonderfully sensuous begining. This one just carried me away. Looking forward to the continuation.
Well done
02/06/07 by kbate
I died when the company was 'him'. So close - but for Lesbian sex, I was unhappy to see that...that...that...'him' was important. Gave you the five anyway - the story was so well written and the mood was so well set that the finale did not detract from the quality of the story, only from the quality of the sex for me.
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